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The following maps show some of the changes that have taken place in Dubai in recent decades. Write a short paragraph of 4-5 sentences to compare and contrast the changes reflected on the map.

The following maps show some of the changes that have taken place in Dubai in recent decades. Write a short paragraph of 4-5 sentences to compare and contrast the changes reflected on the map. r1KKk
The two pictures illustrate the development of Dubai before and after the construction of some facilities. Looking at the pictures, it is clear the most noticeable difference between the two maps involve infrastructure upgrades and the significant changes about accommodation for residents in DuBai. For ten years ago, there were more trees walking along the street. Moreover, Fewer houses and buildings were built in that city. People who did not use modern transport such as cars. Consequently, the main roads running through the entire city from North to South did not have any vehicles. Turning to the present day map, it can be seen that a large amount of shade trees have chopped down. At the centre of the crossroads, the roundabout is surrounded by a few trees. Houses and buildings are demolished to make way for the number of high rise buildings and skyscrapers.
The two pictures illustrate the development of Dubai
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before
and after the construction of
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some
facilities.

Looking at the pictures, it is
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clear
the most noticeable difference between the two maps involve infrastructure upgrades and the significant
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changes
about accommodation for residents in
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DuBai
.

For ten years ago, there were more trees walking along the street.
Moreover
, Fewer
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houses
and buildings
were built
in that city.
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People
who did not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
modern transport such as cars.
Consequently
, the main roads running through the entire city from North to South did not have any vehicles.

Turning to the present day map, it can be
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seen
that a large amount of shade trees have chopped down. At the
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centre
of the crossroads, the roundabout
is surrounded
by a few trees.
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Houses
and buildings
are demolished
to
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make
way for the number of high rise buildings and skyscrapers.
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IELTS academic The following maps show some of the changes that have taken place in Dubai in recent decades. Write a short paragraph of 4-5 sentences to compare and contrast the changes reflected on the map.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
145 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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