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The table below shows the percentage participation of women in senior management in three companies between 1975 and 2015.

The table below shows the percentage participation of women in senior management in three companies between 1975 and 2015. YLB7n

The tabular chart illustrates the proportion of women who participated in senior management positions in three companies over 40 years from 1975 to 2015. Overall, it is evident that the number of women working as a senior manager level in Eldan and Bamforth LTD companies increased dramatically throughout the given time. In contrast, the Finsbury LTD percentage was fluctuated in every five years. In the year 1975 more women were in senior positions at Finsbury Ltd than the other two companies amounting to 16%, but the percentage drop of 14% after five years, followed by a rise of 1% five years later. In 1990, women’s percentage was increased by 7% but again the rate drop back to 20% in 2000. After 15 years, 26% of top posts were filled by women. Furthermore, Eldan and Bamforth are two companies who display a steady increasing trend from the beginning of the period till 2015. There was no change saw in Eldan LTD data in the first five years it was accounted for 3%. Then after five years, the percentage inclined more than threefold and consistently rose in the final year, who made up the highest percentage of 64% that was far more as compared to other companies. Similarly, Bamforth LTD got 9% in the starting years, and gradually increased with an average of 2% in each subsequent period until 2000. However, in 2015 the proportion rose by 29% and recorded as 46%.

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