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The graph below shows US consumers' average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

The graph below shows US consumers' average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. n6Rre
The given graph is a line graph illustrating the annual spending on cell phones and resedential telephone services by American Consumers' over 10 years i. e. from 2001 to 2010. The general trend clearly visible from the given statistics is that the annual expenditures by USA consumers is gradually decreasing for resedential services and gradually increasing for cell phone services from 2001 to 2010. For cell phone services the annual expenditure is around $ 200 in 2001 and it gradually rises each year to approximately $ 750 in 2010. When we observe resedential phone services the annual money spent in 2001 was around $ 700 and it continuously decreases every yer to around $ 400 in 2010. the upward line of cell phone services meets the downward moving line of resedential services in the year 2006 at little more than $ 500. The increase is more for cell phone services i. e $ 550 over 10 years than the decrease for resedential services i. e $ 300 over 10 years. The above paragraph clearly reports the main features and relevant comparisons depicted by the given line graph.
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graph illustrating the annual spending on
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cell
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phones
and
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resedential
telephone
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services
by American Consumers' over 10 years
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i. e.
from 2001 to 2010.

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statistics is that the annual expenditures by USA consumers is
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resedential
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services
and
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increasing for
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cell
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phone
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services
from 2001 to 2010. For
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cell
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phone
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services
the annual expenditure is around
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$ 200
in 2001 and it
gradually
rises each
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year
to approximately
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$ 750
in 2010. When we observe
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resedential
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phone
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services
the annual money spent in 2001 was around
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$ 700
and it
continuously
decreases every yer to around
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$ 400
in 2010.
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the
upward
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of
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cell
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phone
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services
meets the downward moving
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of
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resedential
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services
in the
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year
2006 at
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little
more than
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$ 500
. The increase is more for
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cell
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phone
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services
i. e
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$ 550
over 10 years than the decrease for
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resedential
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i. e
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$ 300
over 10 years.

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reports the main features and relevant comparisons depicted by the
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IELTS academic The graph below shows US consumers' average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

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