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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart below gives information about vehicle ownership in China. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information. You should write at least 150 words.

The bar chart below gives information about vehicle ownership in China. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information. BJlqV
The bar chart illustrates the figures for vehicle ownership per thousand people in China between 1987 and 1999. Overall, automobile ownership is keeping raise the numbers of vehicles in these 12 years. It can be well-observed that in 1999 automobiles number are the highest result between other years. Although, in 1987 China had the lowest vehicle ownership and after 1991 ownership of cars starter to increase. To begin with, in 1987 the number of vehicle ownership per thousand people in China is not raised so much how in 1999, it has a tiny fraction (nearly 500 vehicles per thousand people). However, after 4 years in 1991, the level of automobiles per thousand people was almost a quarter (nearly 1000 vehicles per thousand people). Finally, in the 1995 level of vehicle ownership have started increasing quickly it has nearly three quarters (almost 3000 cars per thousand people). While, in 1999, which is the super number of automobile ownership per thousand people between other years in 1999 the quantity of car ownerships was well over three quarters (almost 4000 vehicles per thousand people)
The bar chart illustrates the figures for
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vehicle
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per thousand
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people
in China between 1987 and 1999.

Overall
,
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automobile
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ownership
is keeping raise the
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numbers
of
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vehicles
in these 12 years. It can be well-observed that in 1999
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automobiles
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number
are the highest result between other years. Although, in 1987 China had the lowest
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vehicle
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ownership
and after 1991
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ownership
of cars starter to increase.

To
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begin
with, in 1987 the
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number
of
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vehicle
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ownership
per thousand
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people
in China is not raised
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so
much how in 1999, it has a tiny fraction (
nearly
500
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vehicles
per thousand
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people)
.
However
, after 4 years in 1991, the level of
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automobiles
per thousand
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people
was almost a quarter (
nearly
1000
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vehicles
per thousand
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people
).

Finally
, in the 1995 level of
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vehicle
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ownership
have
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started
increasing
quickly
it has
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three quarters (almost 3000 cars per thousand
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people)
. While, in 1999, which is the super
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number
of
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automobile
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ownership
per thousand
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people
between other years in 1999 the quantity of car
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ownerships
was well over three quarters (almost 4000
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IELTS academic The bar chart below gives information about vehicle ownership in China. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
180 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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