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The graph below shows the sales of children's books, adult fiction and educational books between 2002 and 2006 in one country.

The graph below shows the sales of children's books, adult fiction and educational books between 2002 and 2006 in one country. Kwn1N
The presented line graph illustrates that the sales of three different kinds of books between 2002 and 2006. The measurement depict in million dollars. Overall, It can be seen that the sale of educational and children’s books showed an upward trend while adult fiction books presented downward trend. First and foremost, In 2002, adult fiction books stood at 45 million dollars, whereas, children’s books at 33 million dollars and education books at 25 million dollars. After a few fluctuations, adult fiction declined to 30 million dollars in the year of 2006. In contrast, educational books were sold least in 2002. But, It reached almost 32 million dollars during the period of 2006. Furthermore, the sales of children books started at 33 million dollars and rose rapidly up to 42 million dollars. In the year of 2003 to 2005, It was slight increase in sales around 45 million dollars. Then after, In 2006 It was gradually increased up to 55 million dollars.
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between 2002 and 2006. The measurement depict in
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of educational and children’s
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showed
an upward trend while adult fiction
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presented downward trend.

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stood at 45
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, whereas, children’s
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at 33
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and education
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at 25
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. After a few fluctuations, adult fiction declined to 30
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in the year of 2006.
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during the period of 2006.

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of children
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and rose
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. In the year of 2003 to 2005, It was slight increase in
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around 45
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. Then after, In 2006 It was
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