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The table below shows the percentage participation of women in senior management

The table below shows the percentage participation of women in senior management 7LaWb
The following table illustrates the proportion of women working in senior management positions in three companies (Eldan Ltd, Bamforth Ltd and Finsbury Ltd) from 1975 to 2015. Overall, it can be seen that all companies increased in the figure for participation of women, especially Eldan Ltd, whereas there was fluctuations in Finsbury Ltd. In 1975, Eldan Ltd had the lowest percentage at only 3%, while Finbury Ltd had the highest rate at 16%. The percentage in Eldan Ltd remained unchanged in the following 15 years and rosed almost three-fold in 1985. Bamforth Ltd’s female working in this position figures constantly increased by 2% in every 15 years. For Finsbury Ltd, its proportion fluctuated between the range around 15% in 1985. Surprisingly, the figures for Eldan Ltd had doubled its amount in 1990 and grew dramatically to 64% in 2015 and became the highest compared to other companies. On the other hand, percentage of female in Bamforth Ltd continued to rose by 2% in every 15 years until 2000, and reached to its peak at 46%. However, by 2015, the amount of female senior managers in Finsbury Ltd only displayed a mere increase to 26% and became the least among the three companies.
The following table illustrates the proportion of women working in senior management positions in three
companies
(
Eldan
Ltd,
Bamforth
Ltd and
Finsbury
Ltd) from 1975 to 2015.

Overall
, it can be
seen
that all
companies
increased in the figure for participation of women,
especially
Eldan
Ltd, whereas
there was fluctuations
in
Finsbury
Ltd.

In 1975,
Eldan
Ltd had the lowest percentage at
only
3%, while
Finbury
Ltd had the highest rate at 16%. The percentage in
Eldan
Ltd remained unchanged in the following 15 years and
rosed
almost three-fold in 1985.
Bamforth
Ltd’s female working in this position figures
constantly
increased by 2% in every 15 years. For
Finsbury
Ltd, its proportion fluctuated between the range around 15% in 1985.

Surprisingly
, the figures for
Eldan
Ltd had doubled its amount in 1990 and grew
dramatically
to 64% in 2015 and became the highest compared to other
companies
.
On the other hand
, percentage of female in
Bamforth
Ltd continued to rose by 2% in every 15 years until 2000, and reached to its peak at 46%.
However
, by 2015, the amount of female senior managers in
Finsbury
Ltd
only
displayed a mere increase to 26% and became the least among the three
companies
.
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IELTS academic The table below shows the percentage participation of women in senior management

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