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The chart shows males and females graduates from HCT colleges in the UAE in 2000.

The chart shows males and females graduates from HCT colleges in the UAE in 2000. 9lLw3
The chart gives information about differences in the number of males and females acquiring bachelor's degrees from HCT colleges in the UAE in 2000. Overall, while there were certain differences in the number of graduates (irrespective of gender) in the 5 investigated colleges, the number of female graduates was noticeably higher than that of their male counterparts. It can be observed that the number of female bachelor’s degree holders outnumbered that of male ones in every case. In general, there were approximately 2500 students acquired college qualification and female accounted for 60% of them. In specific, Dubai college with the most pupils achieving graduation degrees had about 970 graduates in total, among them about 550 were female. Abu Dhabi was the college with the second most graduates, 466 graduates consisting of 293 women and only 173 men. The number of bachelor’s degree holders in Al Ain, Sarjah and Was Al Khaimah college was fairly similar, ranging from 280 to 350 graduates and about 60% of those were female. In summary, the number of female graduated students completely predominated that of male ones, despite certain differences in the number of graduates in each college.
The chart gives information about differences in the
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acquiring bachelor's
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degrees
from HCT colleges in the UAE in 2000.

Overall
, while there were certain differences in the
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graduates
(irrespective of gender) in the 5 investigated colleges, the
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female
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was
noticeably
higher than that of their male counterparts.

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that the
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female
bachelor’s
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holders outnumbered that of male ones in every case.
In general
, there were approximately 2500 students acquired college qualification and
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female
accounted for 60% of them. In specific, Dubai college with the most pupils achieving graduation
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had about 970
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graduates
in total, among them about 550 were
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. Abu Dhabi was the college with the second most
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, 466
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consisting of 293 women and
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173
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men
. The
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of bachelor’s
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holders in Al Ain,
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Sarjah
and Was Al
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Khaimah
college was
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and about 60% of those were female.

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graduated students completely predominated that of male ones, despite certain differences in the
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graduates
in each college.
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