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The table below shows the percentage of population types of houses the live in 3areas in city.summarise.

The table below shows the percentage of population types of houses the live in 3areas in city. summarise. 3017N
The table below depicts the proportion of the total denizens and the type of accomodation they survive in three regions of a city. At fleeting glance, it is apparent from the statistics that central area with the residency of approximately 32, 100 is having more number of deatched houses and less than one fifth is living in flat. Moreover, about more than one in ten is having terraced house and more than a quarter is surviving in a semi detached chamber. Furthermore, green park are with dewellers if around 31, 700 have additional ratio of masses having flat. While, only one in twenty percentile are living in semi detached and detached accommodation. Further scrutinising the graph, it comes to know that less than one fifth denizens are accomodating in terraced kind of home. Additionally sothberg area having about 32, 000 multitudes is having more than half number of residents living in terraced chamber whilst, only a quarter in flat. Apart from this, the individuals staying in semi-detached house are less than detached one Having an overview, it is crystal clear from the data that flat or appartment are more significant whereas, semi detached house are least.
The table below depicts the proportion of the total denizens and the type of
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accomodation
they survive in three regions of a city. At fleeting glance, it is apparent from the statistics that central area with the residency of approximately 32, 100 is
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having
more number of
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deatched
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houses
and less than one fifth is living in
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flat
.
Moreover
, about more than one in ten is
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having
terraced
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house
and more than a quarter is surviving in a semi
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detached
chamber.
Furthermore
, green park are with
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dewellers
if around 31, 700 have additional ratio of masses
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having
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flat
. While,
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only
one in twenty percentile are living in semi
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detached
and
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detached
accommodation.
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Further
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the graph, it
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comes
to know that less than one fifth denizens are
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accomodating
in terraced kind of home.
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Additionally
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sothberg
area
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having
about 32, 000 multitudes is
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having
more than half number of residents living in terraced chamber whilst,
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only
a quarter in
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flat
. Apart from this, the individuals staying in semi-detached
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house
are less than
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detached
one
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Having
an overview, it is crystal
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clear
from the data that
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flat
or
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appartment
are more significant whereas, semi
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detached
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house
are least.
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IELTS academic The table below shows the percentage of population types of houses the live in 3areas in city. summarise.

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