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The rendered chart illustrates the percentile of adults age workers in particular four countries Germany, Japan, U.S.A and France from the year 1960 to 2050. Measurement units are given in percentage.

The rendered chart illustrates the percentile of adults age workers in particular four countries Germany, Japan, U. S. A and France from the year 1960 to 2050. Measurement units are given in percentage. mXwrq
The rendered chart illustrates the percentile of adults age workers in particular four countries Germany, Japan, U. S. A and France from the year 1960 to 2050. Measurement units are given in percentage. Overall, it is clear from the chart that percentage of adults in work force in the initial year the nation Germany and Japan were in increasing treads by the end of year 2050 all nations anticipated to be in increasing treads.
The rendered chart illustrates the percentile of adults
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four countries Germany, Japan, U. S. A and France from the year 1960 to 2050. Measurement units are
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from the chart that percentage of adults in work force in the initial year the nation Germany and Japan were in increasing treads by the
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of year 2050 all nations anticipated to be in increasing treads.
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IELTS academic The rendered chart illustrates the percentile of adults age workers in particular four countries Germany, Japan, U. S. A and France from the year 1960 to 2050. Measurement units are given in percentage.

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