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The diagram illustrates the process of electricity generated by geothermal energy.

The diagram illustrates the process of electricity generated by geothermal energy. mXw0d
The diagram illustrates the process of electricity generated by geothermal energy. Overall, it can be seen there are 5 main steps in this process beginning with pumping water down and ending with the production of electricity by a generator. In the first stage, cold water is pumped down a 4. 5 km long pipe into the injection well. After that, the water goes through an area called a geothermal zone which contains hot rocks to increase the temperature of the water and then moves to the production well where it is pumped up to the condenser and ready for the next step In terms of this stage 4, the condenser delivers the water into steam which is used to power a turbine. The generator uses the power provided by the turbine, producing electricity that is transferred to electricity grids. Finally, electricity is distributed for many different purposes via various power lines.
The diagram illustrates the process of
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electricity
generated by geothermal energy.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
there are 5 main steps in this process beginning with pumping
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water
down and ending with the production of
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electricity
by a generator.

In the
first
stage,
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cold
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water
is pumped
down a 4. 5 km long pipe into the injection well. After that, the
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water
goes through an area called a geothermal zone which contains hot rocks to increase the temperature of the
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water
and then
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moves
to the production well where it
is pumped
up to the condenser and ready for the
next
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step


In terms of this stage 4, the condenser delivers the
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water
into steam which is
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used
to power a turbine. The generator
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uses
the power provided by the turbine, producing
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electricity
that
is transferred
to
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electricity
grids.
Finally
,
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electricity
is distributed
for
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many
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different
purposes via various power lines.
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IELTS academic The diagram illustrates the process of electricity generated by geothermal energy.

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