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The table below shows the percentage of population and the type of house they live in 3 areas of city. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the percentage of population and the type of house they live in 3 areas of city. 53qYe
the supplied tabula chart elucidatesr the proportion of residents and the journal of accommodation they leave in Central, green park, and South Berg area of a cityAs per the systematic information is concerned. It is axiomatic that in flat and apartment, the maximum percentage of population lived in green park area which was 76 %. it was closely followed by South Berg area(25%). ; However, the least percentage of people lived in a central area which makes up 15%. Whereas, 39% people of centre area prefer to live in detached house and 28% in semi detached houses. The 18% people live in terraced in Central area. Probing ahead, 5% each population live in semi detached and detached home in green park. 14 person lives in terraced house. By contrast, despite in Southberg area, only 5% inhabitants stay in semi-detached house, 20% in flat/ apartment. 14 and 56% of peoples are love to live in detached and terraced houses respectively. overall it can be inferred from tabular chart that percentage of population and type of houses they live in 3 areas of city varied a great deal throughout the given period.
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the proportion of residents and the journal of accommodation they
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in Central, green park, and South Berg
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lived
in green park
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which was 76 %.
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people
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centre
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live
in
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detached
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house
and 28% in semi
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detached
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houses
. The 18%
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in terraced in
Central area.

Probing ahead, 5% each population
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live
in semi
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detached
and
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detached
home in green park. 14 person
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in terraced
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Southberg
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,
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5% inhabitants stay in semi-detached
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, 20% in flat/ apartment. 14 and 56% of
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peoples
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detached
and terraced
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houses
respectively
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overall
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IELTS academic The table below shows the percentage of population and the type of house they live in 3 areas of city.

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3 paragraphs
190 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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