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The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. ElxnR
The rendered column graph depicts total percentage of four (drama, comedy, fantasy and romantic) movie released, and total percentage of sale in 1996 and 2000. Drama films were accounted 26 release in 1996, which number boost up sharply, and arrived at 35 released in 2000, which is the highest proportion of graph. Comedy and fantasy movies were went up 5% from past year value(22 and 6 respectively), whereas romantic movies were stable at 5 films released in given period. In 1996 drama and comedy films were sold 16 to 20 ticket, respectively; however, both sector's ticket proportion was significant increase in 2000. Romantic movies were accounted 5 tickets in 1996 whilst, that amount decreased to 2 tickets after four year. Fantasy films noted least number of sales in both year. Overall, it is can be clearly seen that drama, fantasy and comedy movie's sales were increase; however, romance was a only sector which sales fall down in given period.
The rendered column graph depicts total percentage of four
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(drama
,
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comedy
,
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fantasy
and romantic)
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movie
released, and total percentage of
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sale
in 1996 and 2000.
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Drama
films
were accounted
26 release in 1996, which number boost up
sharply
, and arrived at 35 released in 2000, which is the highest proportion of graph.
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Comedy
and
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fantasy
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movies
were
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went
up 5% from past year value(22 and 6
respectively
), whereas romantic
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movies
were stable at 5 films released in
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given
period.

In 1996
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drama
and
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comedy
films
were sold
16 to 20
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ticket
,
respectively
;
however
, both sector's
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ticket
proportion was significant increase in 2000. Romantic
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movies
were accounted
5
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tickets
in 1996 whilst, that amount decreased to 2
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tickets
after four year.
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Fantasy
films noted least number of
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sales
in both year.
Overall
, it is can be
clearly
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seen
that
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drama
,
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fantasy
and
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comedy
movie's
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sales
were increase;
however
, romance was
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a
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only
sector which
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sales
fall down in
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given
period.
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IELTS academic The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country.

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