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The diagram, is demonstrating the process of making cherry jam, including nine steps.

The diagram, is demonstrating the process of making cherry jam, including nine steps. k693n
The diagram, is demonstrating the process of making cherry jam, including nine steps. First, we need to collect cherries(which have a good quality. Then, the cherries are transported to the processing plant. After that, a machine differs good cherries from bad cherries, to remain only the good ones. To continue, good cherries, which wete remained are washed by water. The next step, is to eliminate stones of cherries, by automatic machines. To continue, cherries are cooked by water, sugar and lemon juice. After that, some one checks the quality to ensure they've made a plethora of cherry jams with a good quality. Finnaly, the jams are put into jars and then with stucking a label to the jars, our cherry jams are ready.
The diagram, is demonstrating the process of making cherry jam, including nine steps.
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, we need to collect cherries
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which have a
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good
quality. Then, the
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cherries
are transported
to the processing plant. After that, a machine differs
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good
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cherries
from
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bad
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cherries
, to remain
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only
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good
ones. To continue,
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good
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cherries
, which
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wete
remained
are washed
by water. The
next
step, is to eliminate stones of
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cherries
, by automatic machines. To continue,
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cherries
are cooked
by water, sugar and lemon juice. After that,
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checks
the quality to ensure they've made a plethora of cherry jams with a
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good
quality.
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Finnaly
, the jams
are put
into jars and then with
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stucking
a label to the jars, our cherry jams are ready.
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IELTS academic The diagram, is demonstrating the process of making cherry jam, including nine steps.

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