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The graph below gives information about the number and types of books bought by men and women and four different age groups in the UK Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the number and types of books bought by men and women and four different age groups in the UK LBKV6
The charts give information about the types of books that British men and women and different age groups buy. The initial impression from the charts is that women tend to buy 1 books than men overall, although they buy slightly 2 non-fiction books. The people that buy the 3 books are in the 45+ age group. Nearly 60% of women buy fiction, which is almost two times 4 than the number of men who choose this type of book. Nevertheless, most age groups buy 5 fiction books than non-fiction ones showing that non-fiction is generally 6 popular than fiction. The number of people buying fiction increases steadily from ages 16 to 45 with the 7 number of books, at just over 40% of the age group, bought by 16-to-24-year-olds and the 8 number, at just over 50% bought by the over 45s. However, the pattern is different for non-fiction. The number of books bought by 25-to-44-year-olds is 9 lower than the number bought by 16-to-24-year-olds and those over 45. Just over 40% of 16-to-24-year-olds buy non-fiction, but this number is not as high as the number of people aged 45 and over buying non-fiction, at nearly 60%. Only 31% of 35 to 44 years old buy non-fiction, and the number of 25 to 34 years old is as lower at 28%.
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IELTS academic The graph below gives information about the number and types of books bought by men and women and four different age groups in the UK

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