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It is said that time is precious and it never wait for anyone. These days everyone wants to get their work done on the spot as a result of time shortage and busy schedules. I largely agree with the said notion. However, we can not neglect the hard work of people in the world of modernity. To commence with the agreement, as we are living in the world of technology, due to this change, everything has become so trouble free that it takes no time in doing any process. For example, when we were not introduced to technologies, people had to wait for a long time in lines, on the top of it, they had to plan one day before from their hectic time table so that they could complete their important projects. Moreover, if we peep into multinational call centers, 70% youth are working there as a part time job. As they work there in shifts because of it, they dont even get time to sleep let alone their personal essential works. At that time they try to find out those options in Which they can get quickly solutions. Every information we want to collect, can get online. For example, if we need any architecture, doctor or teacher, we don't need to go out, they are just a phone call away. However, in the world of machinery, we can't not deny the hard work of people. For example, people used to use their hands to hammer the nail. But now drill machines has taken place of the hammers. Each person wants that their work should be in Less time. Consequently their first prefrence is updated carpenters. Think about those workers who cannot afford updated tools? Consequently, they don't get work and wages. To conclude, I would suggest that in modern universe we should make the most of all facilities which has been introduced to us but never underestimate the hard work of those who are also showing potential to get their living better.
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that
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time
is precious and it never
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wait
for anyone. These days everyone wants to
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get
their
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work
done on the spot
as a result
of
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time
shortage and busy schedules. I
largely
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agree
with the said notion.
However
, we can not neglect the
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hard
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work
of
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people
in the world of modernity.

To commence with the agreement, as we are living in the world of technology, due to this
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change
, everything has become
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so
trouble free that it takes no
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time
in doing any process.
For example
, when we were not introduced to technologies,
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people
had to wait for a long
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time
in lines, on the top of it, they had to plan one day
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before
from their hectic
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time
table
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so
that they could complete their
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important
projects.

Moreover
, if we peep into multinational call centers, 70% youth are working there as a part
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time
job. As they
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work
there in shifts
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because
of it, they
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dont
even
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get
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time
to sleep
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let
alone their personal essential works. At that
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time
they try to find out those options in Which they can
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get
quickly
solutions. Every information we want to collect, can
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get
online.
For example
, if we need any architecture, doctor or teacher, we don't need to go out, they are
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just
a phone call away.

However
, in the world of machinery, we
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can't not
deny the
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hard
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work
of
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people
.
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,
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people
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used
to
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use
their hands to hammer the nail.
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now
drill machines has taken place of the hammers. Each person wants that their
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work
should be in Less
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time
.
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Consequently
their
first
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prefrence
is updated
carpenters.
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Think
about those workers who cannot afford updated tools?
Consequently
, they don't
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get
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work
and wages.

To conclude
, I would suggest that in modern universe we should
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make
the most of all facilities which has
been introduced
to us
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but
never underestimate the
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hard
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work
of those who are
also
showing potential to
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get
their living better.
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