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the table below shows the passenger and aircraft movements for last year at singapore changi airport. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table describes how many passengers and aircraft had been in the changi airport of Singapore during the last years. In general, the numbers of passenger traffic and aircraft movements were very similar, the largest numbers were respectively in June (4654569 passengers) and in December (5093465 passengers), and in January (30353 aircrafts) and December (29711 aircrafts). Otherwise the percentages of change from the previous year of passengers were very unstable, with costant upturn and downturn. The lower point of change in passenger movements had been reached in march, with a percentage of -2, 5, followed by November (-1. 1%), august (-0, 6%), December and September with -0, 5%, June (0, 3%) and finally February (0, 2%). On the other hand there were five months were the percentage hadn’t declined, where the peak of change percentage occurred in the January with 6, 3%. The aircrafts movements instead were perfectly divided, in fact in the first part of the year there were only an increase in the percentages, whereas from June to Decembers the numbers had rapidly declined. The peak were reached in January with 7, 6% of change, then it slowly decreased until may, reaching 1. 7%. the downturn started in june with a -0, 5%, reaching -5% in in september and November.
The table
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how
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many
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passengers
and
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aircraft
had been in the
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changi
airport of Singapore during the last years.

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, the numbers of
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passenger
traffic and
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aircraft
movements were
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very
similar, the largest numbers were
respectively
in June (4654569
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passengers)
and in December (5093465
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passengers)
, and in January (30353
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aircrafts
) and December (29711
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aircrafts
).
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Otherwise
the
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percentages
of
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change
from the previous year of
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passengers
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were
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very
unstable, with
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costant
upturn and downturn.

The lower point of
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change
in
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passenger
movements had
been reached
in
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march
, with a
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percentage
of -2, 5, followed by November (-1. 1%), august (-0, 6%), December and September with -0, 5%, June (0, 3%) and
finally
February (0, 2%).
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hadn’t declined, where the peak of
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change
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occurred in the January with 6, 3%.

The
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aircrafts
movements
instead
were
perfectly
divided, in fact in the
first
part of the year there were
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only
an increase in the
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, whereas from June to Decembers the numbers had
rapidly
declined. The peak
were reached
in January with 7, 6% of
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, then it
slowly
decreased until
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may
, reaching 1. 7%.
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the
downturn
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started
in
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june
with a -0, 5%, reaching -5%
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september
and November.
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