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Bar chart about education at high school level

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The given bar chart illustrates the figure of percentage of 55-64 year-olds and 25-34 year-olds with education at high school level in 2010, for Germany, USA, Russia, S. Korea, Brazil and China. The following details can be observed from the given bar chart, S. Korea has the highest percentage of 25-34 year-olds with education at high school, Followed by Russia, whereas China has the lowest percentage. In 2010, S. Korea had the highest education at high school with 97% Followed by Russia with only 6% less education at high school. Whereas Germany and USA had the same education at high school percentage of 88%, however Brazil had the education at high school percentage of 52%. Overall, USA has the highest percentage of 55-64 year-olds with education at high school, Followed by Germany, while China has the lowest percentage. In 2010, USA had the highest education at high school 90% followed by Germany with only 5% less education at high school. Although Russia, S. korea, Brazil and China had only 70%, 43%, 25% and 10% of the education at high school.
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