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Garlsdon is a small town with a population of around 65, 000 along the way of Hindon to Cransdon.

Garlsdon is a small town with a population of around 65, 000 along the way of Hindon to Cransdon. ndDmP
Garlsdon is a small town with a population of around 65, 000 along the way of Hindon to Cransdon. Garlsdon has a fantastic railway service which covers up the housing and town centre. In the town a new warehouse for groceries has been outlined S1 and S2. Opening a department store near the industries is the most convenient place. S1 is in the countryside of Garlsdon and S2 is in the middle of Town centre. Both the places are convenient in various chairs. Taking into account S1, it is along the way from Hindon as well as in the path of the railway it will be opportune to the travellers from Hindon and rails but it is far from the major places of Garlsdon especially residents and industries. On the other hand, S2 is in the middle of the town and near to the housing, consumers will prefer S2. Like every good brings some challenges the Town centre is connected to all three other towns so it will be crowded. Garlsdon with a huge land of countryside, organising two supermarkets in two different locations is a good approach.
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with a population of around 65, 000 along the way of
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Hindon
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Cransdon
.
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Garlsdon
has a fantastic railway service which covers up the housing and
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town
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centre
. In the
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a new warehouse for groceries has
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S1 and S2.

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Garlsdon
and S2 is in the middle of
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centre
. Both the places are convenient in various chairs.

Taking into account S1, it is along the way from
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Hindon
as well
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travellers
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it is far from the major places of
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Garlsdon
especially
residents and industries.
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, S2 is in the middle of the
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and near to the housing, consumers will prefer S2. Like every
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good
brings
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with a huge land of countryside,
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two supermarkets in two
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IELTS academic Garlsdon is a small town with a population of around 65, 000 along the way of Hindon to Cransdon.

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