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Map of library change in 5 years

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The pictures depict the changes that took place in one school library within five years. Overall, the organization of the library underwent several changes, the most important of which is an increase in studying table numbers and a rearrangement of the southwest area. At the bottom left corner, the classroom was narrowed and converted into a recording studio. Similarly, the meeting room was reduced in size to make space for the two rooms catering to borrowing and returning books separately. These rooms were divided from the borrowing and returning desks. Furthermore, in the center of the map, there was an addition of two studying tables in the middle of the old fours, and the space was turned into a private area to increase the concentration of students. The bookshelf in the northside of the studying area remains, whereas the opposite one was replaced by desks for students' laptops. To adapt to the rise of personal devices, the desks for computers in the northeast corner were turned into another area for the laptops. Finally, the library office was redeveloped into the conference room, which satisfies the demand for meetings with bigger size of attenders.
The pictures depict the
changes
that took place in one school library within five years.

Overall
, the organization of the library underwent several
changes
, the most
important
of which is an increase in studying table numbers and a rearrangement of the southwest area.

At the bottom
left
corner, the classroom
was narrowed
and converted into a recording studio.
Similarly
, the meeting
room
was
reduced
in size to
make
space for the two
rooms
catering to borrowing and returning books
separately
. These
rooms
were divided
from the borrowing and returning desks.

Furthermore
, in the center of the map, there was an addition of two studying tables in the middle of the
old
fours, and the space
was turned
into a private area to increase the concentration of students. The bookshelf in the
northside
of the studying area remains, whereas the opposite one
was replaced
by desks for students' laptops.

To adapt to the rise of personal devices, the desks for computers in the northeast corner
were turned
into another area for the laptops.
Finally
, the library office
was redeveloped
into the conference
room
, which satisfies the demand for meetings with bigger size of attenders.
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