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The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbishmen. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how to satisfied they were with their visit,during the same periods.

The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbishmen. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how to satisfied they were with their visit, during the same periods. VO7Q
The table given data about the figures of travellersto Ashdown Museum during the year before and after the year when it was refurbishment while the pie chart illustrates the result of surveys of visitors satisfaction during the same two periods. Overall, there had been larged change in Ashdown Museum of the number of tourists in after refurbishment as well as it was 92, 000 people. As per the table, the figure of travellers was 74, 000 to Ashdown Museum before refurbishment where after refurbishment was 92, 000 during the year. As pie charts, the result of visitors satisfaction was the highest in dis-satisfied, it was well below a half of hundred and the lowest was rock-bottom point about 5% in no response before the year refurbishment whereas after refurbishment largest number was 40% in satisfied as well as undermost pointwas very dissatisfied, no response, it was a tiny position. Moreove, very satisfied things was second highest in after refurbishment rather than before refurbishment.
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IELTS academic The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbishmen. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how to satisfied they were with their visit, during the same periods.

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