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Describe a polite person you know

Describe a polite person you know 8XNB
Politeness has been one of the traits I have always admired in people. It shows me the fact that in the end, we all are the best when we behave as humans. My group mate who named Aygun is the most polite person I know. Not only she respects people she knows, but also she is respectful to everyone who interacts with her, she left deep impression on me about it. Once time a beggar was roaming around our university asking for either food or money and while everyone gave simply money and then disrespectfully asked the person to move, she not only gave her money but also loaf that she bought. On asking her why she did that, she replied that “everyone deserves to be treated respectfully, irrespective of their position, behavior or clothing. ” And the reason why I think she’s so courteous is simply because she has really good manners. She uses the word “thank you” even on the slightest occasion. For instance, I’ve noticed that whenever we eat at a restaurant, she will thank the waiters whenever they bring a dish to the table. And another example would be that every time she gets off a bus, she will always say thank you to the driver, which a lot of people probably think isn’t necessary, but I’m sure the waiters and bus drivers really appreciate it. Finally, whenever our groupmates ask her to help them with difficult tasks, she never complains or shows any hesitation. And due to this, she always maintains a good reputation thanks to her politeness.
Politeness has been one of the traits I have always admired in
people
. It
shows
me the fact that in the
end
, we all are the best when we behave as humans. My group mate who named
Aygun
is the most polite person I know. Not
only
she respects
people
she knows,
but
also
she is respectful to everyone who interacts with her, she
left
deep impression on me about it.

Once time a beggar was roaming around our university asking for either food or money and while everyone gave
simply
money and then
disrespectfully
asked the person to
move
, she not
only
gave her money
but
also
loaf that she
bought
. On asking her why she did that, she replied that “everyone deserves to
be treated
respectfully
, irrespective of their position, behavior or clothing. ” And the reason why I
think
she’s
so
courteous is
simply
because
she has
really
good
manners. She
uses
the word
“thank
you” even on the slightest occasion.
For instance
, I’ve noticed that whenever we eat at a restaurant, she will
thank
the waiters whenever they bring a dish to the table. And another example would be that every time she
gets
off a bus, she will always say
thank
you to the driver, which
a lot of
people
probably
think
isn’t necessary,
but
I’m sure the waiters and bus drivers
really
appreciate it.
Finally
, whenever our
groupmates
ask her to
help
them with difficult tasks, she never complains or
shows
any hesitation. And due to this, she always maintains a
good
reputation
thanks
to her politeness.
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IELTS academic Describe a polite person you know

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  American English
2 paragraphs
263 words
5.5
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