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The table below shows the number of visits to the UK by overseas residents between 1975 and 1998.

The table below shows the number of visits to the UK by overseas residents between 1975 and 1998. gAdbL
The table illustrates the number of times the United Kingdom was visited by foreigners for over twenty-three years. The unit for figures are expressed in millions. Overall, the main reason why travelers often visit UK was because of leisure activity. It can be clearly seen that a huge number of visitors were from Western Europe. Between 1975 to 1998, there has been a dramatic increase in the number of people going in and out of the country. Leisure activity is the main reason why a lot of tourists visit UK. The data shown that there has been a significant increase in the number of dwellers within the 23-year period. People visiting UK because of business continues to increase as the years went by. Majority of tourists come from Western Europe when compared to Northern America and other parts of the world. The number of residents visiting from western region peaked in 1996 then slightly decreased after 2 consecutive years. Backpackers from Northern America and some parts of the globe gradually increase over time and have the same census when they reached 1996.
The table illustrates the
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number
of times the United Kingdom
was visited
by foreigners for over twenty-three years. The unit for figures
are expressed
in millions.

Overall
, the main reason why travelers
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often
visit UK was
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because
of leisure activity. It can be
clearly
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seen
that a huge
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number
of visitors were from Western Europe.
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Between 1975 to 1998
, there has been a dramatic
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increase
in the
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number
of
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people
going in and out of the country.

Leisure activity is the main reason why
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a lot of
tourists visit UK. The data shown that there has been a significant
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increase
in the
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number
of dwellers within the
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23-year
period.
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People
visiting UK
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because
of business continues to
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increase
as the years went by. Majority of tourists
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come
from Western Europe when compared to Northern America and other parts of the world. The
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number
of residents visiting from western region peaked in 1996 then
slightly
decreased after 2 consecutive years. Backpackers from Northern America and
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some
parts of the globe
gradually
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increase
over time and have the same census when they reached 1996.
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IELTS academic The table below shows the number of visits to the UK by overseas residents between 1975 and 1998.

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