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the chart show the sales of different kind of games between 2000 and 2006

the chart show the sales of different kind of games between 2000 and 2006 30Gbd

The given chart gives information about the sales of 4 types of digital games (mobile phone games, online games, console games, handheld games) between 2000 and 2006. The units are measured in billions. Overall, it can be seen that the top seller games were handheld games compared to other types of games over the period given, while the console games were at the lowest point at the end of the period. With regards to handheld games, it was the highest throughout this period, rising from almost 12 billion to just under 18 billion. It had increased steadily. In terms of other types of games, console games look like the only one that has a decrease over this period. It had started from 6 billion and ended this period with approximately half of 6 billion. Mobile games and online games increased sharply even though they were not on the list in 2000. Mobile game sellings were higher than online games until 2005. After that year, online games almost doubled that of its old sales which was under 6 billion and became the second seller games at the end of the period given.

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 between 2000 and 2006. The units are measured
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, while the console You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplaysportbusiness
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end
 of the period.

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games
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