Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The rate of satisfaction of people in before and after renovation

The rate of satisfaction of people in before and after renovation GLB9j
the given table illustrates the information about number of visitors to ashdown museum who visited two different time period before the renovated and after and pie charts depict satisfaction reviews by visitors about both old and new museum. it is noticeable that couting of the visitors were significant gain after the refurbishment. overall, it can be seen tagt in the survey of refurbished museum people had extreme satisfied than old museum. there had only 74000 tourist visited during the before refurbishment however, after the refurbishment visitor number had increased till 92000. survey of old museum that, 40% people were dissatisfied from museum. in contrast, year after refurbishment the amount of dissatisfied people almost swiftly decrease and recorded at 15%. very satisfied visitors were almost more than double(35%) in the favour of renovated museum and satisfied reviews also gained more popularity in new museum (40%) as compare to older museum but no response people were same in both time period although, dissatisfied reviews were 40% in before the refurbishment which had rapidly decreased in new museum
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
table illustrates the information about number of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
visitors
to
Possible spelling mistake found.
ashdown
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
museum
who visited two
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
time period
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
the renovated and after and pie charts depict satisfaction reviews by
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
visitors
about both
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
and new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
museum
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
it
is noticeable that
Possible spelling mistake found.
couting
of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
visitors
were significant gain after the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
refurbishment
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
overall
, it can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
Possible spelling mistake found.
tagt
in the survey of refurbished
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
museum
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
had extreme satisfied than
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
museum
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
there
had
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
74000 tourist visited during the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
refurbishment
however
, after the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
refurbishment
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
visitor
number had increased till 92000.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
survey
of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
museum
that, 40%
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
were dissatisfied
from
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
museum
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
in
contrast, year after
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
refurbishment
the amount of dissatisfied
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
almost
swiftly
decrease and recorded at 15%.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
very
satisfied
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
visitors
were almost more than double(35%) in the
Possible spelling mistake. 'favour' is British English.
favour
of renovated
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
museum
and satisfied reviews
also
gained more popularity in new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
museum
(40%) as compare to older
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
museum
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
no response
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
were same in both time period although, dissatisfied reviews were 40% in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
refurbishment
which had
rapidly
decreased in new
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
museum
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic The rate of satisfaction of people in before and after renovation

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
174 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • The rate of satisfaction of people in before and after renovation