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sawadikhap longkhanh na khrap

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The bar chart compares the differences between the figure for men and women in 6 genres of educational setting in the UK in the year 2010. It can be seen from the bar chart that nursery/ pre-school and primary had women outweigh than men. By constrast, men in worked in university excessive clearly than women. We can see that in College the figure forman and women was equally about 45%. However, the figure for women in Nursery/ Pre-school was nearly 100% and only about 5% in the number of man. Similarly, the percentage of women ( about more 90%) was shaply higher than men (about 9%) in primary school. To be more detailed, Private training institute, there was nearly 60% in the percentage of men and the women was lower by nearly 20%, with 40%. Finally, in University which had the percentage of men higher than women, about 70% and 30% respectively.
The bar chart compares the differences between the figure for
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in 6 genres of educational setting in the UK in the year 2010.

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seen
from the bar chart that nursery/
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pre-school
and primary had
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women
outweigh than
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men
. By
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,
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in worked in
university excessive
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than women.

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that in College the figure
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and
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women
was
equally
about 45%.
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, the figure for
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in Nursery/
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was
nearly
100% and
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only
about 5% in the number of
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man
.
Similarly
, the percentage of
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(
about more 90%) was
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shaply
higher than
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men
(about 9%) in primary school.

To be more detailed, Private training institute, there was
nearly
60% in the percentage of
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men
and the
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women
was lower by
nearly
20%, with 40%.
Finally
, in University which had the percentage of
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men
higher than
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women
, about 70% and 30%
respectively
.
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IELTS academic sawadikhap longkhanh na khrap

Academic
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4 paragraphs
152 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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