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The table below shows the norm hours expenditure om the internet by both male and female in diffirent age groups in Europe

The table below shows the norm hours expenditure om the internet by both male and female in diffirent age groups in Europe e5WWB
The table illusatrates the medium hours spend on the internet by both men and women in diffirent age groups in Europe. Im general, aged 16-20 male and females spent most of there time on the internet, whereas it can be seen clearly that cenior citizens in both genders spent less time than other remaining age groups. To begin with, aged 16-20men and women spend almost equal hour on the internet, accounted for 19and 18 hours. Futhurs, the youngest age group (11-15)was the second active in terms of surting the internet abd there was a mere diffirence between them, stood at 8hours for men and 6 hours for women respectively. By contrast, the figure for middle aged group (21-25)male used the inrernet more than their femailes similar with 11 -15 age groups, consisted for is hour altogether. On the other hand 26-30 ages were either equal regarding spending on the internet 4 hours in both genders. While, aged 31-50females spent major of their time (4hours)on the internet than males (3hours) old age groups, spent less linely than other age groups, accounted for 2 hours for men and 3 hours for women correspondingly.
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spend on the internet by both
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men
and
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women
in
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diffirent
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age
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groups
in Europe.
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general,
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aged
16-20 male and females
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most of there time on the internet, whereas it can be
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clearly
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cenior
citizens in both genders
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spent
less time than other remaining
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age
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groups
. To
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begin
with,
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aged
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16-20men
and
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women
spend almost equal
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hour
on the internet, accounted for 19and 18
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hours
.
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, the youngest
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age
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group
(11-15)was the second active in terms of
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surting
the internet
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abd
there was a mere
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diffirence
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8hours
for
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men
and 6
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hours
for
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women
respectively
. By contrast, the figure for middle
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(21-25)male
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femailes
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, consisted for is
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hour
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26-30
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were either equal regarding spending on the internet 4
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hours
in both genders. While,
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31-50females
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spent
major of their time (4hours)on the internet than males
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(3hours)
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old
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,
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less
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linely
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groups
, accounted for 2
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men
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women
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