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The diagram below shows the process of milk production

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The given diagram illustrates the way in which milk is made. Overall, there are seven steps in milk production, beginning with the milking of cows and ending with product distribution. It can also be observed that the process results in not only milk but also other dairy products. Looking at the first stages, the process begins when cows, which regularly feed on grass, are milked twice a day using milking machines. The milk is subsequenly put into refrigerated vats for cold storage. Once it has been stored for an appropriate amount of time, the milk is then taken out and put on tankers making daily trips to a dairy. At the dairy, the milk is processed using a system of machines, which transform some of the milk into cheese, cream and butter, while the rest undergoes pasteurization in order to eliminate bacteria before being packed into containers. The final products are put on sale at supermarkets and shops, concluding the process.

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given
 diagram illustrates the way in which You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
is made
. Overall
, there are seven steps in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
 production, beginning with the milking of cows and ending with product distribution. It can also
be observed
 that the process results in not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 other dairy products.

Looking at the first
 stages, the process This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatescommences
begins
 when cows, which regularly
 feed on grass, are milked
 twice a day using milking machines. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
 is Possible spelling mistake found.subsequently
subsequenly
 put into refrigerated vats for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
 storage. Once it has been stored
 for an appropriate amount of time, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
 is then taken out and put on tankers making daily trips to a dairy.

At the dairy, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
is processed
 using a system of machines, which transform If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?some
some of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
 into cheese, cream and butter, while the rest undergoes pasteurization in order to eliminate bacteria This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
being packed
 into containers. The final products are put
 on sale at supermarkets and shops, concluding the process. 