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The Percentage of Online Adults using various Websites in the USA

The Percentage of Online Adults using various Websites in the USA NrkX2

The graph gives information about the survey outcomes of teenagers online using different social entertaining in America from 2012 to 2015. Between 2012 and 2013, the four various types of social networking such as Facebook, LinkedIn, Twitter, and Instagram gradually rose. Nevertheless, the percentage of Facebook users from 2012 to 2015 was higher than other social media in America, while the proportion of adults who used the Pinterest site was twice time rocketed from 15% to 31% in 2012 and 2015. Instagram soared from 15% to almost 30% in 2014, yet it was a short climb to 28% in 2015. Besides that, LinkedIn and Twitter were a noticeable increase in the same percentage rates between 2012 and 2014. Even though the proportions were similar from 2014 and 2015, the percent of LinkedIn insignificantly decreased, while the percent of Twitter remained stable. Moreover, between 2013 and 2015, Facebook was a possible amount increase from 71% to 72%. In addition, the proportion of the internet community Facebook increased steadily over the period, plus the ratio of Instagram, LinkedIn, and Twitter completely fluctuated, and the Pinterest trend in the proportion of adults using the website rapidly peaked.

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