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Country medal leaders of all time-badminton and rowing

Country medal leaders of all time-badminton and rowing 2bBkw
The bar chart illustrates the country medal leaders in badminton and also the number of gold, silver, bronze medals won by each country. The pie chart, however, shows which countries are the most successful in rowing. Looking at the bar chart it is easily apparent that China has been significantly more successful than any other country in badminton. They have achieved far more gold medals than other countries but have gained only slightly more silver and bronze medals. The pie chart, on the other hand, shows that the USA won the most medals in rowing. They were a little more successful than Great Britain, however. The other three countries represented won roughly the same number of medal each. To summariser therefore, both charts illustrates the country medal leaders in badminton and also the number of gold, silver and bronze medals won by each country. The pie chart, however, shows which countries are the most successful in rowing.
The bar
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illustrates the
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country
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leaders in badminton and
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the number of gold, silver, bronze
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medals
won by each
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country
. The pie
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,
however
,
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which
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countries
are the most
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successful
in rowing. Looking at the bar
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it is
easily
apparent that China has been
significantly
more
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successful
than any
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country
in badminton. They have achieved far more gold
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than
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countries
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have gained
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only
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more silver and bronze
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. The pie
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, on the
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hand,
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that the USA won the most
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medals
in rowing. They were a
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little
more
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successful
than Great Britain,
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. The
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three
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represented won roughly the same number of
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each. To
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therefore
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leaders in badminton and
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the number of gold, silver and bronze
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won by each
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. The pie
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,
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IELTS academic Country medal leaders of all time-badminton and rowing

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