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How do people spend on fuel?

How do people spend on fuel? RNBp8

The line graph shows the amount of fuel spent by various consumers. The data varies among the United States and the UK. The vertical axis depicts the proportion of income, while the horizontal one-the types of people. Overall, it can be seen from the line graph that The United States takes the leading position in consuming the fuel more by the poorest consumers than the richest part of the population. Meanwhile, we can see the opposite trend in the UK with poor people consuming fuel less than the middle class and the rich. The poorest Americans spend on fuel more than anyone else throughout the country, accounting for a peak of 5. 2 percent of income, while the poorest British accounts for 2. 5 percent, at the maximum. Middle-income Americans spend on fuel roughly as much as the richest and they constitute just over 3. 5 percent of income likewise upper middle-income British.

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 the amount of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withelectricityfoodmaterialgasammunition
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 spent by various consumers. The data varies among the United States and the UK. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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 from the line graph that The United States takes the leading position in consuming the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withelectricityfoodmaterialgasammunition
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 more by the poorest consumers than the richest part of the population. Meanwhile, we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
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 the opposite trend in the UK with poor This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
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 and the rich.

The poorest Americans spend on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withelectricityfoodmaterialgasammunition
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 more than anyone else throughout the country, accounting for a peak of 5. 2 percent of income, while the poorest British accounts for 2. 5 percent, at the maximum.

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fuel
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