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The table below shows the mode of transport used by People of england

The table below shows the mode of transport used by People of england Mo03p
The table shows distance travelled by people of England through various transportation in the year 1985 and 2000. Overall, average distance travelled by people was increased over the years. People used public transportation like railway, bus more than walking and riding in bicycle. In the year 1985, majority of the people used their car more than other way of transportation and they continued to travel more in the year 2000 by 4806. Other transportation like Long distance bus, train, taxi and other mode significantly increased however, Walking, Bicycle Local bus travel was gradually decreased. Moreover, Local bus recorded a drastic drop to 274 from 429 where Long distance bus attained a drastic raise in the year 2000. Even though, there was a slight drop noted in some mode of transportation but still average distance travelled by the people of England improved in the crucial way from 4740 to 6475 in the year 2000.
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2000 by 4806. Other
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2000.

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