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Thefts per thousand in 3 countries from 1990 to 1999

Thefts per thousand in 3 countries from 1990 to 1999 Ryg6W
The line graph represents robberies per thousand vehicles in the Great Britain, Sweden, France and Canada in 10 years from 1990 to 1999. In 1990, Great Britain faced about 18, 000 thefts, it showed a upward trend till 1992, it declined till 1993 and rose till 1996 and it again started showing a downward trend till 1999 with around 17, 000 robberies. The number of robberies were comparatively very low in the other three countries. Thefts in Sweden were approximately 8, 000 in 1990. Thereafter, the number of thefts in Sweden were same as France in 1991. However, it kept rising continuously after that till 1999 with around 14, 000 robberies. Whereas, the thefts in France were lowest in 1990(6, 000). The number of robberies were highly fluctuating with continous ups and downs in the figures. In 1999, the number was same in Canada(6, 000). Whilst, robberies were approximately 7, 000 in Canada in 1990. Although it kept on going down until 1993, it started to rise again with around 6, 000 robberies in 1999. Overall, the thefts were highest in Great Britain throughout all the years, whereas, the thefts were lowest in France in 1990, however, 1991 onward, Canada became the country with the lowest robberies till 1998. Number of robberies were the lowest in Canada and France with the same number of robberies in 1999.
The line graph represents
robberies
per thousand vehicles in the Great Britain, Sweden, France and Canada in 10 years from 1990 to 1999.

In 1990, Great Britain faced about 18, 000
thefts
, it
showed
a
upward trend till 1992, it declined till 1993 and rose till 1996 and it again
started
showing a downward trend till 1999 with around 17, 000
robberies
. The
number
of
robberies
were
comparatively
very
low in the other three countries.

Thefts in Sweden were approximately 8, 000 in 1990. Thereafter, the
number
of
thefts
in Sweden were same as France in 1991.
However
, it
kept
rising
continuously
after that till 1999 with around 14, 000
robberies
. Whereas, the
thefts
in France were
lowest
in 1990(6, 000). The
number
of
robberies
were
highly
fluctuating with
continous
ups and downs in the figures. In 1999, the
number
was same in Canada(6, 000). Whilst,
robberies
were approximately 7, 000 in Canada in 1990. Although it
kept
on going down until 1993, it
started
to rise again with around 6, 000
robberies
in 1999.

Overall
, the
thefts
were highest in Great Britain throughout all the years, whereas, the
thefts
were
lowest
in France in 1990,
however
, 1991 onward, Canada became the country with the
lowest
robberies
till 1998.
Number
of
robberies
were the
lowest
in Canada and France with the same
number
of
robberies
in 1999.
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