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The table below shows the main reasons why men and women shop at Tesco Supermarket

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The table shows that men and women choose Tesco for similar reasons, mainly the distance from home, the good reputation of the supermarket and the parking facilities. Overall, it is striking that both the ranking of the factors and the number of respondents is very similar for both men and women. While the main reason for men is that Tesco is near their home with 27 respondents, the top reason for women is the good reputation with 22 respondents. The location was a close second, however, and parking was mentioned by the same number of 22. Many men similarly rated reputation and parking as major factors with 17 and 21 respectively. Competitive prices were also a significant factor for men and women, while both the friendly staff and the 24-hour opening hours were of low significance. In fact, no women mentioned the latter as being significant, while only 4 men chose it as the main reason.
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,
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the distance from home, the
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reputation of the supermarket and the parking facilities.

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similar for both
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is near their home with 27 respondents, the top
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for
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women
is the
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good
reputation with 22 respondents. The location was a close second,
however
, and parking
was mentioned
by the same number of 22.
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Many
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men
similarly
rated reputation and parking as major factors with 17 and 21
respectively
.

Competitive prices were
also
a significant factor for
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men
and
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women
, while both the friendly staff and the 24-hour opening hours were of low significance. In fact, no
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women
mentioned the latter as being significant, while
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4
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men
chose it as the main
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IELTS academic The table below shows the main reasons why men and women shop at Tesco Supermarket

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
156 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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