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The table illustrates the proportion of people using differents forms of transports for their journeys in four countries.

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The table illustrates the proportion of people using different forms of transports for their journeys in four countries. The chart shows the percentage of those reasons why people go to work by car. Cars are used most in the USA with ninety percent of transports used, followed by the UK (72 percent), France (68 percent) and Netherlands (47 percent). Besides, figures for other forms varied considerably. Not surprisingly, in Netherland, a high proportion of people travelling by bicycle (26 percent) and on foot (18 percent). In the UK and France, however, people use public transport and travel on foot more than by bicycle. The bar chart demonstrates reasons why using car to work accounts for a large percentage in the USA. Nearly forty percent of respondents said that they do not have alternative and over twenty percent said that it is because of its convenience. Other factors are mainly about need rather than prefer, for example, work nightshift. In conclusion, the figures show variation in modes of transports used, though car continues to predominate.
The table illustrates the proportion of
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for their journeys in four countries. The chart
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shows
the percentage of those reasons why
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go to work by car.

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used
most in the USA with ninety
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of
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transports
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used
, followed by the UK (72
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, France (68
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and Netherlands (47
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.
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, a high proportion of
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travelling by bicycle (26
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and on foot (18
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. In the UK and France,
however
,
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people
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public
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and travel on foot more than by bicycle.

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Nearly
forty
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of respondents said that they do not have alternative and over twenty
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said that it is
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because
of its convenience. Other factors are
mainly
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, work
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, the figures
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show
variation in modes of
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transports
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used
, though car continues to predominate.

IELTS academic The table illustrates the proportion of people using differents forms of transports for their journeys in four countries.

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