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The table below shows the average incomes of scientists employed by the National of Health. (NIH)

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The given table compares the differences in the pay of males and females scientists according to their position in the National Institute of Health. Overall, men earn more than women in almost all positions. Furthermore, the highest and lowest differences in salaries can be seen where the smallest number of females is employed. It can be seen that women earn much less than men, and differences vary between 197$ and 9121$. There is only one position in which women scientists have higher salaries, and it is Lab Chief MD. Furthermore, this is the biggest difference among all incomes (10509$). Females and males have almost the same salaries in the position of Lab Chief PhD, the difference accounts for only 197 dollars. Also, there are more men scientists at NIH than women. For example, the biggest number of men in one position is 483 compared to 118 number of women, so the difference in the highest indicators is 365.
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in the National Institute of Health.

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in almost all
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scientists have higher salaries, and it is Lab Chief MD.
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among all incomes (
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). Females and males have almost the same salaries in the
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of Lab Chief PhD, the
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scientists at NIH than
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in the highest indicators is 365.
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IELTS academic The table below shows the average incomes of scientists employed by the National of Health. (NIH)

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