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The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. 6j1B

The given maps illustrates the development of road access around city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Overall, it can be seen that, East and South of the city Hospital there were huge development occurs in 2010. To begin with, city hospital take place center of Ring road. In 2007, East and west side of Hospital Road were bus stop and near of the East side of bus stop there were car park for both staff and public. To contrast, in 2010 East side of the city Hospital added car park for public. Furthermore, Hospital and city Road take the same place in 2007 and 2010. Moreover, staff car park was increased there space. There were bulid new roundabout in North and South of the Hospital road in 2010. West side of the Hospital road replaced Bus station and there were two way to out of the bus station from the two roundabout. Last but not the least, Ring road was the remain same as in 2007.

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road
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hospital
 in 2007 and 2010. Overall
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Hospital
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hospital
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. In 2007, East and west side of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
Hospital
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Road
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 there were car park for both staff and public. To contrast, in 2010 East side of the city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
Hospital
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added
 car park for public. Furthermore
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Hospital
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 there space. There were Possible spelling mistake found.buildbu lid
bulid
 new roundabout in North and South of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
Hospital
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road
 in 2010. West side of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
Hospital
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road
 replaced Bus station and there were This word is normally spelled with hyphen.two-way
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but
 not the least, Ring You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
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the remain
 same as in 2007. 