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The table below shows the average family income and expenses in the US in 1980 and 1985. Write a short report for a univer earsity lecturer describing the changes.

The table below shows the average family income and expenses in the US in 1980 and 1985. Write a short report for a univer earsity lecturer describing the changes. JVAJe
The table illustrates information surveyed of the standard earnings and the habit Americans spent their money in the US in 1980 and 1985. Overall, there were some notable shifts in the figure through five years, owing to the ceaseless advancement of the markets, their compensation has a significant rise, yet the way their disburse just has a steady fluctuation. Firstly, in 1980, the average salary fluctuated in the range of $12, 000 and climbed $4, 000 to $16, 000 in 1985. In the same way, their investment in the estate sector was from second in the past, after 5 years soaring to the top of the table in 1985, at 25% and 32%, respectively. Besides, they budgeted for the nourishment also increased 4% from 18% to 22% in those two years. In contrast, the only thing that declines is the highest expenses in the others in 1980 had a precipitous plunge from 35% to 22% in 1985.
The table illustrates information surveyed of the standard earnings and the habit Americans spent their money in the US in 1980 and 1985.
Overall
, there were
some
notable shifts in the figure through five years, owing to the ceaseless advancement of the markets, their compensation has a significant rise,
yet
the way their disburse
just
has a steady fluctuation.

Firstly
, in 1980, the average salary fluctuated in the range of $12, 000 and climbed $4, 000 to $16, 000 in 1985.
In the same way
, their investment in the estate sector was from second in the past, after 5 years soaring to the top of the table in 1985, at 25% and 32%,
respectively
.
Besides
, they budgeted for the nourishment
also
increased 4% from 18% to 22% in those two years.
In contrast
, the
only
thing that declines is the highest expenses in the others in 1980 had a precipitous plunge from 35% to 22% in 1985.
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IELTS academic The table below shows the average family income and expenses in the US in 1980 and 1985. Write a short report for a univer earsity lecturer describing the changes.

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