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a college education has a lot of advantages and goals

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Well known, a college education has a lot of advantages and goals. Half of people put their believe that a college education can be improve and helpful for many people to get a good work. Besides, others believe that a college education has a huge advantages both of individuals and community. Although, I tend agree to the beneficial of college education impact to both of subject, not only personally but have a positive impact to our community. As well as we know, we do agree that after graduated from university we have a good qualifications to fulfill the job requirements, which is nowadays a lot of corporation need human resources graduated from university. Although this is not the only one reason about the beneficial of higher education. Actually, we know the government has a three mandatory for university should be deliver which is called “Tri Dharma Perguruan Tinggi” or 3 points of higher education mandatory that consist of education, research, and empowerment of community or society. So, the beneficial of higher education is not just only for student or lecturer that join directly in campus but also for the community outside of the campus. If we based on this regulation and concern about the empowerment of society, the college education must be delivered this beneficial to our community because it’s compulsory and indeed effect to the quality and indeed to the achievement rank of the university education. Even though, many universities have had been developed and empowered to our community for well-being or straightforward the future of their life. Lastly, in my own perspective the beneficial of college education it’s have a wide range positive impact both of personal business and also for community.
Well known, a college
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education
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a lot of
advantages and goals. Half of
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people
put their
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believe
that a college
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education
can be
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improve
and helpful for
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many
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people
to
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get
a
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good
work.
Besides
, others believe that a college
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education
has a huge
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advantages
both of individuals and
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community
. Although, I tend
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agree
to the
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beneficial
of college
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education
impact to both of subject, not
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only
personally
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but
have a
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positive
impact to our community.

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as we know, we do
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agree
that after graduated from
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university
we have a
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good
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qualifications
to fulfill the job requirements, which is nowadays
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a lot of corporation
need human resources graduated from
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university
.
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one reason about the
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beneficial
of higher education.

Actually, we know the
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government
has a three mandatory for
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university
should be
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deliver
which
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Tri
Dharma
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Tinggi
” or 3 points of higher
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education
mandatory that consist of
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education
, research, and empowerment of
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community
or society.
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, the
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beneficial
of higher
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education
is not
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just
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only
for student or lecturer that
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join
directly
in campus
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also
for the
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community
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outside of
the campus. If we based on this regulation and concern about the empowerment of society, the college
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education
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must
be delivered
this
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beneficial
to our
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community
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because
it’s compulsory and
indeed
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indeed
to the achievement rank of the
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university
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education
.
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,
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many
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universities
have had
been developed
and empowered to our
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community
for well-being or straightforward the future of their life.

Lastly
, in my
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own
perspective the
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beneficial
of college
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education
it’s have a wide range
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positive
impact both of personal business and
also
for
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community
.
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IELTS academic a college education has a lot of advantages and goals

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6.0
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