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The bar graph shows the result of a survey about the ways people bought and drank coffee and tea in five cities in Australia in last 4 weeks.

The bar graph shows the result of a survey about the ways people bought and drank coffee and tea in five cities in Australia in last 4 weeks. 6m3jx

The bar graph shows the result of a survey about the ways people bought and drank coffee and tea in five cities in Australia in last 4 weeks. Overall, people in four out of the five cities in Australia got coffee or tea at a café most, following is buying instant coffee and the least people’s habit is buying fresh coffee. In Sydney, as well as all four others, people infrequently bought the fresh coffee most. And people in this area bought instant one more often. However, they spent much more time going to a café to enjoy coffee than these two habits. People in Melbourne almost got coffee the same way as in Sydney, but they less bought fresh coffee and spent more time for other two habits. The residents of Brisbane least bought fresh coffee in the five cities. Instead, they spent these time almost equally on getting to café for coffee and buying the instant one. The report of the cities of Adelaide is different from the rest that its people most bought instant coffee than the other two in spite of the fact that they buying instant one just a little bit more than going to a café. And in the last city, Holbart, people spend time on each habit almost similar to Sydney, Melbourne and Brisbane despite the fact that there is a more clearl difference in the percentage of each habit to others here.

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