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The pie chart below shows the cost of construction of house.

The pie chart below shows the cost of construction of house. JKAn5
The pie chart gives data about the cost of materials for building a house. Overall; as it can be seen, the cost of labor has the highest amount of money whereas the lowest cost belongs to timber. At first glance; almost around one quarter of construction’s total cost is related to labor while the minority cost of materials for building a house is related to timber and nearly 10%. According to the pie chart; the cost of Cement is roughly 20% of total cost for building a house, so it has the second highest cost of construction. steel similarly to supervision and bricks has a small minority of total cost and it just less than a fifth.
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of labor has the highest amount of money whereas the lowest
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belongs to timber.

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first
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is related
to labor while the minority
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of materials for building a
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is related
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10%. According to the pie chart; the
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of Cement is roughly 20% of total
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cost
for building a
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,
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it has the second highest
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of construction.
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steel
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minority of total
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and
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IELTS academic The pie chart below shows the cost of construction of house.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
117 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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