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The table below shows social and economic indicators for countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics. v.2

The table below shows social and economic indicators for countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics. v. 2
The table compares four countries in terms of social and economic factors in the years 1994, based on United Nations statistics. It is clear that Canada and Japan had the biggest figures. Additionally, the data of Zaire was by far lowest in the four countries. As can be seen from the table, the average income of Japanese on a yearly basis was highest with 15760 USD, followed by that of Canada with 11100 USD. In comparison, the figures for Peru and Zaire were just around 1% that of Japan. While life expectancy in Canada and Japan were 76 and 78 years respectively, those of the remaining countries were roughly 49 years. Regarding the rest indicators, Canada had the highest data for daily calorie supply per capita at 3326 calories, compared to Japan at 2846 calories. Meanwhile, this average indicator of both Peru and Zaire was around 1800 calories. In terms of adult literacy rate, Canada and Japan had the same percentage at 99%, as opposed to Zaire which this proportion was just over three times lower that of Canada and Japan. Also, this rate of Peru was at 68%, which doubled the data of Zaire.
The table compares four countries in terms of social and economic factors in the years 1994, based on United Nations statistics.

It is
clear
that Canada and
Japan
had the biggest figures.
Additionally
, the data of Zaire was by far lowest in the four countries.

As can be
seen
from the table, the average income of Japanese on a yearly basis was highest with 15760 USD, followed by that of Canada with 11100 USD.
In comparison
, the figures for Peru and Zaire were
just
around 1% that of
Japan
. While life expectancy in Canada and
Japan
were 76 and 78 years
respectively
, those of the remaining countries were roughly 49 years.

Regarding the rest indicators, Canada had the highest data for daily calorie supply per capita at 3326 calories, compared to
Japan
at 2846 calories. Meanwhile, this average indicator of both Peru and Zaire was around 1800 calories. In terms of adult literacy rate, Canada and
Japan
had the same percentage at 99%, as opposed to Zaire which this proportion was
just
over three times lower that of Canada and
Japan
.
Also
, this rate of Peru was at 68%, which doubled the data of Zaire.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
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IELTS academic The table below shows social and economic indicators for countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics. v. 2

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