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The pie charts below show the percentage of housing owned and rented in the UK in 1991 and 2007. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate.

The pie chart demonstrates the proportion of housing owned and rented in the UK from 1991 to 2007. It is clearly visible that the share of home owners has been increased dramatically in this period of time. However, number of people who rent a house as social renting has been decreased. As more people have found the ability to buy houses, more people quit social renting. As the numbers suggests, total available homes have grown by approximately a quarter. From all the houses available to rent people can either rent a house socially with partners or privately with nobody else. There is also an option to house socially with other people against being a home owner and buy the house completely on your own. Talking about social housing, it seems nowadays people tend to live privately more than the 90's. Although private renting share is constant among these years, it is clear to see that in 2007 social housing is not a desirable choice anymore.
The pie chart demonstrates the proportion of housing
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owned
and rented in the UK from 1991 to 2007.

It is
clearly
visible that the share of
This noun normally spelled as one word.
home owners
has
been increased
dramatically
in this period of time.
However
, number of
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people
who rent a
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house
as
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social
renting has
been decreased
. As more
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people
have found the ability to
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buy
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houses
, more
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people
quit
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social
renting.

As the numbers suggests, total available homes have grown by approximately a quarter. From all the
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houses
available to rent
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people
can either rent a
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house
socially
with partners or
privately
with nobody else. There is
also
an option to
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house
socially
with other
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people
against being a
This noun normally spelled as one word.
home owner
and
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buy
the
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house
completely on your
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own
.

Talking about
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social
housing, it seems nowadays
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people
tend to
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live
privately
more than the
Apostrophes aren’t needed for decades: “90s”.
90's
. Although private renting share is constant among these years, it is
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clear
to
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see
that in 2007
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social
housing is not a desirable choice anymore.

IELTS academic The pie charts below show the percentage of housing owned and rented in the UK in 1991 and 2007.

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