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The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists traveling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market.

The two graphs illustrate the number of Japanese toured overseas between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share in Japan's tourism. Overall, vacationists from Japan spent overseas steadily increase over a decade, whereas the percentage of Australia's share of the Japanese tour market shown an upward trend. The number of Japanese travelers visiting other countries progressed gradually from 1985 at about 5 million and doubled after five years, with approximately 11 million in population. However, a slight drop in number occurred in 1991 at nearly half a million. Subsequently, the tourist population regained momentum, which rate grew from 1992 almost reached 12 million and peaked in the tenth year (1995) at roughly 15 million tourists. While Australians shared in Japanese traveler business started in 1985 at 2% and further increased to 5% in 1988. Nonetheless, the following year, a slight drop of roughly 1% is noted. Although in 1990, the tourist market recovered with almost 5% market share, the trend continuously climbed in three consecutive years, which reached just above 6. 2% but made the slightest decline in 1994.
The two graphs illustrate the number of Japanese toured overseas between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share in Japan's tourism.

Overall
, vacationists from Japan spent overseas
steadily
increase over a decade, whereas the percentage of Australia's share of the Japanese tour market shown an upward trend.

The number of Japanese travelers visiting other countries progressed
gradually
from 1985 at about 5
million
and doubled after five years, with approximately 11
million
in population.
However
, a slight drop in number occurred in 1991 at
nearly
half a
million
.
Subsequently
, the tourist population regained momentum, which rate grew from 1992 almost reached 12
million
and peaked in the tenth
year
(1995) at roughly 15
million
tourists.

While Australians shared in Japanese traveler business
started
in 1985 at 2% and
further
increased to 5% in 1988. Nonetheless, the following
year
, a slight drop of roughly 1%
is noted
. Although in 1990, the tourist market recovered with almost 5% market share, the trend
continuously
climbed in three consecutive years, which reached
just
above 6. 2%
but
made the slightest decline in 1994.
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