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The table below shows information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries.

The table below shows information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries. 6bRK

The table illustrates the population of aged 65 and over for three different countries and as well as an estimate of the population in the same category. The data here represented in terms of percentage. Overall, it is seen that population of aged 65 and above has been rising steadily for Canada and Germany, but for the British, the population growth is seen only in the prediction. The population in the UK has not recorded growth as much as recorded by the other two countries. From 1988 to 2000, Canada and Germany both have seen gradual rise of almost 5%. Canada has seen growth from around 16% in 1988 to almost 21% in 2000 and Germany recorded the same 5% growth with around 20. 5% in 1988 to 25% in 2000. While the UK remain unchanged with only 0. 5% negligible growth from 1988 to 2000 in the population of aged above 65. However, the UK further predicted a steep upward in population from almost 15% in 2000 to around 20% in 2030 and at the same time, Canada and Germany has also projected 6% & 5% respectively estimating at around 26% for Canada and almost 30. 5% for Germany in 2030.

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