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The graph below shows the average retirement age of males and females in six countries in 2003. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average retirement age of males and females in six countries in 2003. jwRp

The given bar charts illustrate the information about the average retirement age of male and female from six different countries in 2004 and 2008. Overall, it is manifest that the highest retirement age for both genders is seen in Sweden whereas the least has come from France. To commence with, the highest retirement age for men was 63 and 64 in 2004 and 2008 respectively. Surprisingly, Italy has allocated 60 for male throughout the given period. In 2004, Denmark and the UK had set mere two thirds for retirement age for male whereas the Netherlands had set criteria to 62 for the retiring process. The male people were retiring at age of 63 and 62 in Netherland and the UK in 2008 while men were retiring at age of 58 in France in 2008. Probing further, once again the highest age for retirement was 63 and 64 for female in Sweden in 2004 and 2008 respectively. In 2004, Denmark and the UK allocated criteria for retirement was 59 and 60 for female respectively whereas France and Italy had the same criteria for retirement which constituted were 58. The women were retiring at the age of 61 and 62 in Netherland in 2004 and 2008 respectively.

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