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Chat show the percentage of pollutants enter a particular part of ocean in 1997 and 2007

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The given Pie Charts illustrate the information regarding proportion of pollutants enter a specific part of ocean in the year of 1997 in 2007. Over all it is clear from the chart that pollution from domestic sewage and Offshore oil increased there was a drop in proportion of other pollution. According to the chart domestic Savage escalated significantly from 18% to 29% during 10 years. Pollutants from air word approximately similar at 30% in both given years. Proportion of Offshore oil Rose from 5% in 1997 to 14 percent in 2007. It can be seen that marine pollution was 22% in 1997 which was decline after a decade and reach at 17%. The pollution from farm waste was 4% in 1997 which decreased two percent in 2007. Industrial waste accounted for 70% in 1997 however the ratio was fell down at 9% in 2007. . there was no litter after 10 year in the ocean.

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 Pie Charts illustrate the information regarding proportion of pollutants enter a specific part of ocean in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
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 of 1997 in 2007.

Over all it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 from the chart that pollution from domestic sewage and Offshore oil increased there was a drop in proportion of other pollution.

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 years. Proportion of Offshore oil Rose from 5% in 1997 to 14 percent in 2007.

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 that marine pollution was 22% in 1997 which was decline after a decade and reach at 17%. The pollution from farm waste was 4% in 1997 which decreased two percent in 2007. Industrial waste accounted for 70% in 1997 however
 the ratio was fell down at 9% in 2007. Don't put a space before the full stop.
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 in the ocean. 