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The chart shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six science-related subjects at a UK university in 2009

The chart shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six science-related subjects at a UK university in 2009 2WQ6
The bar chart shows the comparison between the gender through six scientific research at UK university in 2009. In five of all subjects, males are promoted instead of females. This significant discrepancies can be observed among these titles. Biology holding the first position with 270 scholars. The second place was occupied by Physics with 230 pupils. The Biology and the Medicine are the fields in which there are equal numbers of men and women. Nonetheless, in a field of Veterinary Medicine, the female is known for being equipped with many facilities. To summarize, men are more skilled in five cases instead of women. Although they have shown their perfection in Veterinary Medicine, which can be fabulous in life science.
The bar chart
shows
the comparison between the gender through six scientific research at UK university in 2009.

In five of all subjects, males
are promoted
instead
of females. This significant discrepancies can
be observed
among these titles. Biology holding the
first
position with 270 scholars. The second place
was occupied
by Physics with 230 pupils.

The Biology and the Medicine are the fields in which there are equal numbers of
men
and women. Nonetheless, in a field of Veterinary Medicine, the female
is known
for
being equipped
with
many
facilities.

To summarize
,
men
are more skilled in five cases
instead
of women. Although they have shown their perfection in Veterinary Medicine, which can be fabulous in life science.
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