Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The following bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The following bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000. Ng5g
The bar chart indicates the various modes of transport user to travel in one European city in 1960, 1980, and 2000. Overall, when we take a look at the bar chart, we can easily see, the most used transport has changed throughout the years. The transport facilities are flexible. However, transport facilities using by people during the years. Firstly, the bus had some fluctuaions within the years. The bus mostly was using by people with approximately 27 % in 1980. When it comes to the car, therr is a significant differences throughout the years. The percentage of using the car was around 37 % in 2000. Thirdly, the bike has decreased by years. It was on the peak of the bar chart in 1960 with almost 26 %. Lastly, the people travel on their own as well. In 1960 almost 37 % people travel on foot, on the bright side, it has diminished between 1980 and 2000.
The bar chart indicates the various modes of
transport
user to travel in one European city in 1960, 1980, and 2000.

Overall
, when we take a look at the bar chart, we can
easily
see
, the most
used
transport
has
changed
throughout the years. The
transport
facilities are flexible.
However
,
transport
facilities using by
people
during the years.

Firstly
, the bus had
some
fluctuaions
within the years. The bus
mostly
was using by
people
with approximately 27 % in 1980. When it
comes
to the car,
therr
is a significant
differences
throughout the years. The percentage of using the car was around 37 % in 2000.
Thirdly
, the bike has decreased by years. It was on the peak of the bar chart in 1960 with almost 26 %.

Lastly
, the
people
travel on their
own
as well
. In 1960 almost 37 %
people
travel on foot, on the bright side, it has diminished between 1980 and 2000.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic The following bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
157 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts