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The table below shows iformation and prediction regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries.

the table prvides information about pediction increase in percentage of pupulation aged 65 in Canada, Germany and UK, during the years 1988, 20 and 2030 years. Overall, it is estimated that a number of population aged 65 will rise significantly in Germany than two counrties. On the contrary, British population wunt up slowly by 2030. Between 1988 and 2000. Population of Canada and Germany went up by arround 5% to 20. 67% and 25. 32%. on the contrary, there was a change unsignificantly of almost less a fifths of UK population BY 2030. It is expected that in all three countries will be vitel shifting of approximately 5. 5 percent. it is forecate to reach close to 30. 42 percent in germany, roughly more one quarter percent in Canada. Finally, slightly more a fifth percent in UK
the
table
prvides
information about
pediction
increase in percentage of
pupulation
aged 65 in Canada, Germany and UK, during the years 1988, 20 and 2030 years.

Overall
, it
is estimated
that a number of population aged 65 will rise
significantly
in Germany than two
counrties
.
On the contrary
, British population
wunt
up
slowly
by 2030.

Between 1988 and 2000. Population of Canada and Germany went up by
arround
5% to 20. 67% and 25. 32%.
on
the contrary, there was a
change
unsignificantly
of almost less
a fifths
of UK
population


BY 2030. It is
expected
that in all three countries will be
vitel
shifting of approximately 5. 5
percent
.
it
is
forecate
to reach close to 30. 42
percent
in
germany
, roughly more one quarter
percent
in Canada.
Finally
,
slightly
more a fifth
percent
in UK
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IELTS academic The table below shows iformation and prediction regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries.

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