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The table below shows consumer perferences for the features of automatic washing machines in different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The table below shows consumer perferences for the features of automatic washing machines in different countries. m9038
The table graph depict the information about the features of automatic washing machines for consumer preferences in countries like United kingdom, Germany, France and Sweden. It is crystal clear from that the washing machines are use by people in different countries. There are eight features of washing machine that vary in these four countries. The first features of washing machines is shell dimension, which accounts for 34 inches in four countries but the width narrow range in uk and france while has wide range in Germany and Sweden. Drum material which is made of enamel in the UK and France while in Germany and Sweden, it is made of stainless steel. Following step, the loading feature in the UK on the top but while the other countries in the front. Capacity varies from 5 to 6 kilos and spin speed various from 600 rpm to 850 rpm. Moving ahead, the feature of water heating system is not present in Uk and Sweden as well as, in Germany and France the feature of water heating system is available. The action of washing machine is agitator in uk and france. while the action of washing machine is tumble in Germany and same as Sweden. Lastly, the styling features of four countries is vary while styling features in UK is inconspicuous appearance, in Germany it is indestructible appearance and elegant appearance is present in France while the strong appearance is present in Sweden.
The table graph depict the information about the features of automatic washing
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, Germany, France and Sweden. It is crystal
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from that the washing
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machines
are
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people
in
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different
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countries
. There are eight features of washing
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machine
that vary in these four
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countries
. The
first
features of washing
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machines
is shell dimension, which accounts for
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34 inches
in four
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countries
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but
the width narrow range in
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uk
and
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france
while has wide range in Germany and Sweden. Drum material which
is made
of enamel in the UK and France while in Germany and Sweden, it
is made
of stainless steel. Following step, the loading
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feature
in the UK on the top
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but
while the other
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countries
in the front. Capacity varies from 5 to 6 kilos and spin speed various from 600 rpm to 850 rpm. Moving ahead, the
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feature
of water heating system is not present in
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Uk
and Sweden
as well
as, in Germany and France the
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feature
of water heating system is available. The action of washing
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machine
is agitator in
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uk
and
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france
.
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while
the action of washing
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machine
is tumble in Germany and same as Sweden.
Lastly
, the styling features of four
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is
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vary
while styling features in UK is inconspicuous
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appearance
, in Germany it is indestructible
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appearance
and elegant
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appearance
is present in France while the strong
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appearance
is present in Sweden.
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IELTS academic The table below shows consumer perferences for the features of automatic washing machines in different countries.

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